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My mate said this was a good succinct poem but I fucked it

 

In old age

I toileted my father

I didn't know "toileted" was a thing

its just life

& one if anyone has any decency/dignity one does what has to be done

No big deal


Apparently people big note it

I didn't really realise for a long time that my culture was so pissweak


But "toileting" was a reminder of my dad & me:

He had a bigger dick

He was a better singer

But I am a better poet

& he was a wife, child beater


Nevertheless, I liked him

This poem is not the succinct poem that my friend liked


I'm less funny

My dick is not as big

I'm a good singer, but not as good

I'm less popular

People liked him, less they like me

I'm more ethical, regardless the cost


What losers call

the "moral victory"


I'm a loser.


What I've learned from 2 failed marriages

is that women prefer bullies

or they'll bully


Or as my first wife said about Picasso

"he was good at girls."


Ha.



Published & Copyright Malachi Doyle 2024.

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